jueves, 21 de octubre de 2010

My ideal partner

Dear Maria
I'm writing to you to tell you what my partner is she very beautiful, her eyes are green and small, her hair is long and brown, she has a big and beautiful smile  an incredible body.


My ideal partner is Angelina Jolie


Self- reflection
Es una carta a un amigo en la cual describimod a nuestra pareja ideal. Lo que mas se me dificulto fue el uso de los pronombres me confundi y puse your en lugar de her ya que her se refiere a la persona que describo y no a la que la lee.

1 comentario:

  1. Hey Zoiber,
    How are you doing today? This work you did her is very good but you forgot something VERY important...
    Your self-reflection.

    There was also a small mistake where you said "your hear" when it should be "her hair".

    If you say "your", I will think that you are talking about me. :)

    -e

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